Monday, May 2, 2011

Peer Review Comments

For Cristian:
Nice job relating this book to the Russian Revolution, the connections are made well . Although it is kind of hard to see where your second quote ends/starts.

For Devin:
Good job comparing your two books, but I think you could have a read a book that is a little more up to high school level . Just saying .

For Lhadze:
This is a very good review . I like how you compared the characters to yourself and your feelings toward the same subject as them . It made them seem more realistic .

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